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Termites Built Anthill

Drunken man slept on head termites built anthill woke up, made alarm

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Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 8/1/2017 2:34:00 AM

Pharaohs still dream in their immortal pyramides built by the termites-people. Master of Haiku, I enjoyed the miracles of your poetry and that invoked of nature. The echo in contemporary world (of drunken or indifferent people) a multitudes of slaves (of instinct, improer behavior, habits of commodity, reification and cultural industry). Best regards and wishes.

Solomon Ochwo-Oburu
Date: 8/1/2017 2:40:00 AM

Thank you my dear for the inspiring words. Indeed this poem is universal and cuts across time. Be blessed, Bocsa.