Termites Built Anthill

Drunken man slept
on head termites built anthill
woke up, made alarm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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August 1, 2017 at 2:34 AM
Pharaohs still dream in their immortal pyramides built by the termites-people. Master of Haiku, I enjoyed the miracles of your poetry and that invoked of nature. The echo in contemporary world (of drunken or indifferent people) a multitudes of slaves (of instinct, improer behavior, habits of commodity, reification and cultural industry). Best regards and wishes.
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August 1, 2017 at 2:40 AM
Thank you my dear for the inspiring words. Indeed this poem is universal and cuts across time. Be blessed, Bocsa.
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