terminus station

falls raindrops reaching 


bitter cold grips my fingers


winter takes my hand
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Slaughter Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 10:28 AM
I'm with Karen, Chis. You can't quit after penning a piece like this.
Vionet Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 4:20 PM
A lovely haiku, Chris =]
Conn Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 4:37 PM
Just a guess; Is your safe word ‘marry-me?’
Buehler Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 12:28 AM
A lovely haiku, with interesting, vivid imagery. Kindest regards, Evelyn
Conn Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 5:57 PM
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April 17, 2024 at 9:47 AM
Thanks Evelyn. What’s life without wings?
Croft Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 6:15 AM
Beautiful poem! I hope it's not your last! I love reading haiku
Conn Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 1:12 PM
Grand finale.
Lawless Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 9:27 AM
this is gonna rattle around in my head all day Chris. A really nice Haiku
Conn Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 1:13 PM
Thanks John.
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