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Tequila Sunrise

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Shipwrecked; to be carried by the waves unto a distant shore?! Washed upon an uncharted island both, tattered and torn.... Rags which cling unto sunburnt flesh; eyes swollen Half shut above burning lips blistered in parched Concealing a tongue that cannot speak; did not!? Upon these knees, struggling to my feet that I may gaze Across the endless ocean with its, glorious horizon.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ....“Its * Tequila Sunrise” ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/13/2012 8:30:00 PM
I just love these stories that have two sides to them. This could be a story about a beach side pool bar, too many Tequila Sunrise drinks and the morning after or just a fantasy from too many Tequila Sunrise drinks. What ever it was a fun read. Huggs TLee
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Date: 2/2/2012 6:04:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you John. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2012 1:02:00 PM
you have another soupmail hun,
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Date: 1/20/2012 12:53:00 PM
Oh Captian, Oh! Captain! farewell to thee. Do the right thing please. if you love me in simplicity, I wouldhold you so very tightly. I love you, to my demise.
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Date: 1/9/2012 11:56:00 PM
do I need to say something abt ur artistic write...u know i already cherish ur works John...cheers!!!!!!
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Date: 11/22/2011 7:30:00 PM
This has such a lonely feeling John, Your shipwreck is full of descriptions thaat echo the lonliness.
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Date: 9/17/2011 7:15:00 PM
I like this John Hopes you dont mind me passing. Dawn x
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Date: 9/10/2011 12:00:00 PM
hiya how are you John, sorry for late reply not ben on much am divorced now but still standing firm take care my dear and special friend God bles from diane
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Date: 7/26/2011 8:58:00 PM
Very beautiful, you have painted a vivid picture!!
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Date: 7/19/2011 11:00:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today John.
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