The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide

Tequila Sunrise

so,
what about last night?

this morning, 
you’re blaming it on too much tequila.
not that cheap kind,
but the kind with the intoxicated 
worm in the bottom of the bottle
that you’re suppose to eat to finish off 
your high.

you shouldn't have eaten that worm.

see,
that worm
caused you to raise your hand
when you should have been bowing your head.
that worm
caused you to call me out of my name
when you should have been begging for mercy.
that worm
made you forget that I 
was the mother of your child, not your baby's mama.

Now, daylight casts black streaks across your face
as it seeps between the cracks in the blinds.
But they will fade
when the sun fully rises.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ondrich Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 6:21 AM
Carol, well-written. I feel your anger and pain and resilience and strength. I have been here before. Thank you for sharing this with us. Much love, Cynthia.
Brown Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 5:05 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Carol. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
Reed Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 11:42 AM
are you forgiving him? stick by your guns and let black streaks stay as a reminder for the next time. :-) - Alan
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