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Tepid Wind

Tepid wind that neither cools nor warms, blowing with no destination. Similarities abound to my scattered mind's state. Thoughts run here and there with no passion, or purpose: with no love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/26/2011 7:01:00 PM
ahhh, this is a great one, and great metaphor, sweetie! I sure have missed some very good poetry of yours lately.
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Date: 3/21/2011 3:11:00 PM
Perhaps we Moonchildren should build a fire and try to ignite some passion, Francine. A very moving poem to which many of us can relate. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/21/2011 4:54:00 AM
A beautiful similie in this write. I can so picture this.
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Date: 3/21/2011 4:47:00 AM
Emotionally charged lines to your Nonet Francine.. unique and different approach my friend.. good luck in the contest ...touches the deepest part of love ..luv..
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Date: 3/21/2011 4:10:00 AM
This poem has a haunting aspect to it, I could almost feel that tepid wind, well done~~
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