Kaushal Saboo Poet Rhyme

Tension

What Is This Life Which Is Full Of 
Tension? 
No Time To Do 
Fun And Relaxation. 

Every Parents Want Their Child To Shine, 
No One Think That Is It Fine? 

Children’s Tension Are, 
Study And Exam, 
They Have To Study Whether, 
It Is Cold Or Warm. 

A Paper Note Has More Value, 
Than Our Creativity, 
Every Student Is Suciding, 
In Village Or In City. 

What Is This Life Which Is Full Of 
Tension? 
No Time To Do 
Fun And Relaxation.

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Josie Whitehead May 19, 2012 at 1:54 AM You are quite right. What does it mean to "succeed" in life? Is it working hard, passing exams, getting a better paid job than the man next door. Or does it mean, in God's eyes, showing love and caring for others in the world, caring for the world in which we live and making the area where we live a place to be proud of? I think sometimes we need to stand back and think. Your poem really hits the mark. Good one.