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Tension

Too much tension on a wire Will cause it to snap, Too much tension in the brain Makes for mean collapses, Be sure to rig with a swag And protect your synapses. written October 2, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/6/2021 12:46:00 PM

This is incredibly above my head and yet my soul liked it.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/6/2021 12:47:00 PM

Aw, surely not, Caren. I can't imagine writing anything that you wouldn't get in a flash!

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 10/3/2021 5:25:00 AM

I think my synapses are refusing to fire, they have gone on strike lol...Delice

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/3/2021 8:54:00 AM

Aw, that can happen, Delice. Maybe you need to find a nice park somewhere in your neighborhood and do some people-watching. Anything to release the tension! Love your comments and thank you!