Tending Children

Grins Happy Spirited Children playing, Their soul will enliven as my heart smiles. But a child crying with a sad-face frown, Shatters my joy. Dreadfully. Until Grins © July 22, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: "Smiles and Frowns Sponsored by: Michael J. Falotico

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/22/2011 10:44:00 AM

Their souls enliven as your heart smiles...what a lovely way to describe the joy you receive from your grandchildren, Dane. And the last verse is certainly true as well. Love the way you ended it on a positive note. Great work, Mee-Maw! Best wishes in Michael's fun contest. Love you, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/24/2011 4:46:00 PM

Big Smiles, Carolyn Thank you for your comment. Love, Mee-Maw! (Love the spelling! Hee-Haw! LOL)