Tender Wise

raven whispered

                                              lullaby

                                      dream awakening








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Brenda Chiri

Date: 8/23/2019 8:47:00 AM

You know I love this if a raven is in it I love it!;)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/23/2019 1:55:00 PM

I thought you might like this one ;), Thank you Brenda! xomo

Sand Blown

Date: 7/25/2019 4:37:00 PM

now there's a good idea there...an alarm clock called "quoth the raven"... and instead of ringing to keep you from dropping into slumber again... the clock repeats 'N E V E R M O R E'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2019 5:40:00 PM

this is such interesting imagery, Maureen. Lovely

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/23/2019 10:27:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! One of those "I just do what my muse tells me to" pieces ;) xomo

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/21/2019 5:44:00 PM

Hello Maureen, Enjoyed this poem. Hugs Darlene

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/22/2019 8:44:00 PM

Thank you Darlene, my muse doth indulge ;), Take care! xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/21/2019 1:25:00 PM

Fantastic dearest, Maureen! Adore it! Hugs xxx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/22/2019 8:43:00 PM

Thank you Sweet D! xomo <3

Jeff Connelly

Date: 7/20/2019 10:53:00 PM

Never more Maureen. As a kid in our town there was a Raven that could speak. He was a very talented bird, though I never heard a lullaby from his beak; though one time he hurt his wing and was hitchhiking on the roadside. True story.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/22/2019 10:54:00 PM

A side note: I just bought a t-shirt that I've been itching for for quite awhile. It is an old family portrait photo of a complete family: mom and dad baby on knee brother and sister standing on the dide; but they all have Poe's face and the caption reads: " I'm Just. Poe Boy From a Poe Family". Totally hilarious Maureen!!!

Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/22/2019 10:49:00 PM

My god yes, they are amazing!!! Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/22/2019 8:43:00 PM

I believe it. crazy intelligent birds. xomo