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This is an Ode about New Zealand. Wellington is its capital; Auckland is the largest city (lines 1 to 3). It garnered economic advantage through films that a Minister of Lord of the Rings was once created to ensure maximum earnings (lines 4 & 5). The longest place name in the world is Taumatawhakatangihangakoauauotamateapokaiwhenuakitanatahu, a hill in Hawkes Bay (line 6). It is the least corrupt nation in the world- tied with Denmark (line 9) and the only country in the world where all the highest positions have been simultaneously held by women. In 200, the Queen, Governor General, the prime minister, the speaker of House of reps and chief Justice are all women (line 9). The Kea bird pulls windscreen wipers off cars and eats the strips of rubber from windows (line 12). Pelorus Jack was a Dolphin who guided ships through dangerous and rocky waters around New Zealand in the early 1900s (line 19). Henry the tuatara was a father for the first time at the age of 111 years (line 22). Harold Gillies who pioneered plastic surgery is a kiwi (line 23). Edmund Hilary, a Kiwi is the first man to climb Mount Evarest (line 2). New Zealand has 2 National Anthems: “God save the Queen” and “God defend New Zealand” (line 26). Its maori name is Aoetaroa which means “Land of the long white cloud” (line 27) and finally, it’s the first country in the world to give women rights to vote (line 29).

A nation with the southernmost capital in the globe whose identity has constantly been bullied by the global acknowledgement of a larger one. A place where economic empowerment comes through films to the point a movie employed a minister for maximum harvest. No name longer than that of a Hill in Hawkes Bay; no part of the country is more than hundred and a thirty kilometer from the sea; no nation is least succulent for the biting teeth of corruption. And no other has simultaneously graced females in all high national positions. Isolation has ruled over its wild life to make them manufacture accessories for unique survival. The alpine parrots, ground dwelling Kiwis and the Kea bird all congregate in its center of diverse bird species. It is a log off site to snakes both local or immigrated and a home to the world’s smallest Dolphin species; second to none in the species of penguins and land to the heaviest insect ever known in the world. Imagination comes to life in the existence of a giant carnivorous snail while Disney embraced reality through the mystery of Pelorus Jack. Uniqueness in history is continuous in this last populated habitable landmass in the world. Is it a first time father at eleven and a century old? Or the pioneering of plastic surgery in medical history? Is it the appointment of a national wizard into government’s cabinet? Or the historic climbing adventures of Edmund Hilary? So concerned about the Queen’s safety and its territorial defense is such a region attributed to the long white cloud with its blue lake- the world’s clearest waters and its ‘women’s-right-on-voting” pride; It’s still flabbergasting to realize five out of every hundred of its population is human; the rest simply animals.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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