Ten Little Ponies Jumping On the Bed

Ten little ponies jumping on the bed One fell off and the other said Look at Chester! That horse is dead.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/30/2020 3:52:00 AM

My mind is blown at the title! Funny to think of 10 ponies jumping on the bed. Now the other part of my imagination goes to the movie The Godfather where a horse’s head was in the bed. So a bit of a child’s song here but not mere childplay...lol!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2020 6:14:00 AM

I got that! ;)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/30/2020 12:57:00 PM

It was a parody of 10 little Monkeys jumping on the bed. I thought everyone would get that but I thought ponies was hilarious!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2020 2:13:00 PM

HA! You are so clever always coming up with so many little things!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/29/2020 10:49:00 PM

Thank Andrea. I as in a pretty silly mood yesterday.