Ten Hungry Vultures

Hungry vultures; there were ten, just sitting in a tree
One fell out and bit the dust while my wife made my tea

Hungry vultures; there were nine, among the leaves so green
One chewed dirt as my wife scrubbed the tractor’s tyres clean

Hungry vultures; there were eight, just sat there on a branch
One dropped off, devoid of breath, while my wife cleaned the ranch

Hungry vultures; there were seven, in that tree so high
One fell, due to sudden death, while my wife baked a pie

Hungry vultures; there were six, all hid behind a twig
One fell down while my wife caught and barbecued a pig

Hungry vultures; there were five, sat in that sycamore
One crashed down, with quite a splat, while my wife swept the floor

Hungry vultures; there were four, sat on the highest bough
One smashed into bloodied ground as my wife milked the cow

Hungry vultures; there were three, sat high above the trunk
One dropped off while my wife cleared the beer cans I had drunk

Hungry vultures; there were two, just sitting in a nest
One dropped dead while I sat in a chair and had a rest

Hungry vulture; just the one, watched my wife make a trifle
He’s dead because she’s angry, and a crack shot with a rifle

Hungry vultures; there are none, now sitting in the tree
My wife is cooking vultures, but her rifle’s trained on me
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Alhemaidy Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 8:31 PM
Hello Terry Flood, Interesting and well enjoyed read! Have a good day ~ AA
Bauer Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 11:56 AM
Such a fun poem, Terry! Made my day - thanks for that!
Flood Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 3:51 AM
Thanks, Ilene. Seemed a simple notion when I started it but it took a lot more effort than I’d imagined…. I mean, how many ways can you describe a vulture falling out of a tree? ;-) Terry
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March 24, 2024 at 5:40 AM
Excellent Terry, with madcap humour threaded throughout, each one better than its predecessor, right up to and including the last one, too good! Cheers David
Flood Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 3:48 AM
Glad you enjoyed, David. To be honest my mind is struggling to clear after spending what seemed an age on a stupidly long Freezer Mice adventure. I think it would need posting in at least three parts so I’m undecided about inflicting that on Soup. I considered posting as a ‘short’ rhyming story… but I’m not sure anyone reads them. ;-) Terry
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