Temptuous (6 Little Words/Haiku)

Masculine scents,
his torso sighs - 

 

lust...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 4, 2009 at 12:17 AM
Well that's one word for it Ann-Marie an excellent senryu either way.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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April 3, 2009 at 1:34 AM
I see the erotic feelings are not confined to the male poets here on the Soup. And I must say, the image you describe causes me to sigh as well. If I ever get to sleep again, I hope this "temptuous" one is in my dreams, Anna-Marie!
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