Laura Hay Poet Rhyme

Tempting Tart

Simply delightful
Just like trifle
Sticky Toffee
Or even banoffee
New York baked
Yummy carrot cake

But you can't beat the sugary taste
That sticks to your lips and clings to your waist,
Of the lushness of strawberry tart
Tingling your tongue and melting your heart
Crumbling of pastry, licking of cream
Juicy bite of strawberry, heavenly dream

23 Oct 2015

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Rob Bettridge January 22, 2016 at 7:57 AM As a Bloke, I enjoyed the parallel.lol Laura Hay January 22, 2016 at 11:08 AM Tee hee ??, glad you enjoyed, thanks for stopping by! Rgds Laura

Jan Allison January 22, 2016 at 7:23 AM mmm a delicious write Laura I feel hungry now!!!:-) hugs Jan xx Laura Hay January 22, 2016 at 7:38 AM Thank you for stopping by! warm regards, Laura

Elis Artis January 12, 2016 at 1:19 PM Your description is so vivid, it feels like a lucid dream. I can almost taste the tart. Great job! And I love the rhymes btw:) Laura Hay January 22, 2016 at 7:37 AM Thank you for your kind comments! warm regards, Laura

M. Sana December 8, 2015 at 11:12 AM cute poem..!!! Laura Hay January 22, 2016 at 7:37 AM Thank you for stopping by! warm regards, Laura

Sara Kendrick November 13, 2015 at 10:56 AM Very descriptive work about the Strawberry Tart..A delightful dessert that you have described..Thanks for stopping by my page.. Laura Hay January 22, 2016 at 7:35 AM Thank you for your kind comments! warm regards, Laura

Kevin Fairbrother November 12, 2015 at 4:19 PM Great little verse Laura, tempting to say the least, cheers Kev Laura Hay November 13, 2015 at 1:34 AM Thanks again Kev! Warm regards, Laura.

Skat A November 5, 2015 at 1:35 PM Stopping by to enjoy the sound of a sweet tempting tart. MMM... my sweet tooth is still enjoying this poem. SKAT Laura Hay November 5, 2015 at 1:56 PM I'm glad you enjoyed this SKAT, thanks for dropping by, warm regards, Laura

James Inman November 1, 2015 at 10:42 PM Nice rhyme, Laura. Love strawberry tart or anything with strawberries. Laura Hay November 3, 2015 at 7:35 AM Thank you James :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 1, 2015 at 10:25 PM Congrats on ur superb win with this yummy awesome write Laura! Laura Hay November 3, 2015 at 7:35 AM Thank you very much!! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 1, 2015 at 8:08 PM Laura, I couldn't ignore this one because of its yummy 2nd stanza that really tickles my senses but also my cheeks for a chuckle...!! the rhyme goes we and imagery is thumbs up! BIG CONGRATULATIONS!~ Olive Eloisa =`) Laura Hay November 3, 2015 at 7:35 AM Thank you very much Olive Eloisa, much appreciated :)

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2015 at 5:01 PM Congrats for your win. A tasty delight! Laura Hay November 3, 2015 at 7:34 AM Thanks Andrea :)

Skat A November 1, 2015 at 2:55 PM Laura, congratulations. SKAT Laura Hay November 1, 2015 at 2:57 PM Thank you SKAT! ;) Kind Regards, Laura.

Sara Kendrick November 1, 2015 at 1:25 PM Ahh!! Melt in your mouth goodness!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara Laura Hay November 1, 2015 at 2:56 PM Thanks very much Sara, Kind Regards, Laura. Laura Hay November 1, 2015 at 2:55 PM Thank you Eve! Much appreciated, Kind Regards, Laura.

Eve Roper November 1, 2015 at 12:34 PM Wonderful write, Laura, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve Laura Hay November 1, 2015 at 2:57 PM Thank you Eve! Much appreciated, Kind Regards, Laura.

Lin Lane November 1, 2015 at 8:33 AM Your tart gives you a sweet win, Laura. Congratulations. I'm interested in your 'banoffee.' Banana coffee cake? Laura Hay November 1, 2015 at 2:55 PM Thank you Lin ;) , my banoffee is banana and toffee cheesecake which is delish too :)

Paul Callus October 24, 2015 at 5:22 PM Excellent, Laura! You manage to tempt with your tart content and the lovely rhyme that goes with it! The second part of the poem sounds delicious:) #7 ~ sweet regards // paul Laura Hay November 1, 2015 at 2:53 PM Thank you so much for your support Paul, much appreciated as always, kind regards, Laura.