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Tempting Tart

Simply delightful
Just like trifle
Sticky Toffee
Or even banoffee
New York baked
Yummy carrot cake

But you can't beat the sugary taste
That sticks to your lips and clings to your waist,
Of the lushness of strawberry tart
Tingling your tongue and melting your heart
Crumbling of pastry, licking of cream
Juicy bite of strawberry, heavenly dream

23 Oct 2015

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Rob Bettridge Date: 1/22/2016 7:57:00 AM As a Bloke, I enjoyed the parallel.lol Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 1/22/2016 11:08:00 AM Tee hee ??, glad you enjoyed, thanks for stopping by! Rgds Laura

Jan Allison Date: 1/22/2016 7:23:00 AM mmm a delicious write Laura I feel hungry now!!!:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 1/22/2016 7:38:00 AM Thank you for stopping by! warm regards, Laura

Elis Artis Date: 1/12/2016 1:19:00 PM Your description is so vivid, it feels like a lucid dream. I can almost taste the tart. Great job! And I love the rhymes btw:) Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 1/22/2016 7:37:00 AM Thank you for your kind comments! warm regards, Laura

M. Sana Date: 12/8/2015 11:12:00 AM cute poem..!!! Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 1/22/2016 7:37:00 AM Thank you for stopping by! warm regards, Laura

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/13/2015 10:56:00 AM Very descriptive work about the Strawberry Tart..A delightful dessert that you have described..Thanks for stopping by my page.. Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 1/22/2016 7:35:00 AM Thank you for your kind comments! warm regards, Laura

Kevin Fairbrother Date: 11/12/2015 4:19:00 PM Great little verse Laura, tempting to say the least, cheers Kev Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/13/2015 1:34:00 AM Thanks again Kev! Warm regards, Laura.

Skat A Date: 11/5/2015 1:35:00 PM Stopping by to enjoy the sound of a sweet tempting tart. MMM... my sweet tooth is still enjoying this poem. SKAT Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/5/2015 1:56:00 PM I'm glad you enjoyed this SKAT, thanks for dropping by, warm regards, Laura

James Inman Date: 11/1/2015 10:42:00 PM Nice rhyme, Laura. Love strawberry tart or anything with strawberries. Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/3/2015 7:35:00 AM Thank you James :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/1/2015 10:25:00 PM Congrats on ur superb win with this yummy awesome write Laura! Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/3/2015 7:35:00 AM Thank you very much!! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/1/2015 8:08:00 PM Laura, I couldn't ignore this one because of its yummy 2nd stanza that really tickles my senses but also my cheeks for a chuckle...!! the rhyme goes we and imagery is thumbs up! BIG CONGRATULATIONS!~ Olive Eloisa =`) Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/3/2015 7:35:00 AM Thank you very much Olive Eloisa, much appreciated :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/1/2015 5:01:00 PM Congrats for your win. A tasty delight! Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/3/2015 7:34:00 AM Thanks Andrea :)

Skat A Date: 11/1/2015 2:55:00 PM Laura, congratulations. SKAT Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/1/2015 2:57:00 PM Thank you SKAT! ;) Kind Regards, Laura.

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/1/2015 1:25:00 PM Ahh!! Melt in your mouth goodness!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/1/2015 2:56:00 PM Thanks very much Sara, Kind Regards, Laura. Laura Hay Date: 11/1/2015 2:55:00 PM Thank you Eve! Much appreciated, Kind Regards, Laura.

Eve Roper Date: 11/1/2015 12:34:00 PM Wonderful write, Laura, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/1/2015 2:57:00 PM Thank you Eve! Much appreciated, Kind Regards, Laura.

Lin Lane Date: 11/1/2015 8:33:00 AM Your tart gives you a sweet win, Laura. Congratulations. I'm interested in your 'banoffee.' Banana coffee cake? Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/1/2015 2:55:00 PM Thank you Lin ;) , my banoffee is banana and toffee cheesecake which is delish too :)

Paul Callus Date: 10/24/2015 5:22:00 PM Excellent, Laura! You manage to tempt with your tart content and the lovely rhyme that goes with it! The second part of the poem sounds delicious:) #7 ~ sweet regards // paul Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/1/2015 2:53:00 PM Thank you so much for your support Paul, much appreciated as always, kind regards, Laura.