Tempting

Tempting...

If she leaned forward
just a little more
over her centre
of gravity
seriously...
She might fall
over the edge
of unreasonable doubt... 
And recall laughing 
hilariously... 
At herself. 


Aqua Marine. Just Musing. 
Posted/Written: Saturday, 16th November, 2024.

how i feelintrospectiontodayfree verse

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Silent One

November 16, 2024 at 4:45 AM

Interesting title and poem.. have to be careful how we fall and if it is worth falling... depending on the situation it normally is not... Interesting musing my friend..

Silent One

November 16, 2024 at 7:48 AM

I'm.sorry to hear that...I hope you have the right people around you to help... and don't worry about not being able to communicate with others...I'm sure they understand

Aqua Marine

November 16, 2024 at 7:33 AM

I keep saying Thank You, for not giving up on me... I'm doing whatever it takes, to 'rewire' myself. It means giving up for good, those coping mechanisms that are overprotective of my inner self. I am working on that. Have to break the dysfunctional cycle. Even if it hurts for now. ((Big Hugs)) - I'll comment more when I visit your poems-been reading them on the quiet... : D

Aqua Marine

November 16, 2024 at 7:25 AM

Hey there, SO, lovely to have you visit and comment very much appreciated! (I need to stay in contact with you, and others, who help me be more self aware I can't understand myself, or those who are important in my life, by isolating through fear of being hurt) I have Generalized Anxiety Disorder - it's a constant struggle to not always expect the worst case scenario as the only possible outcome.

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