Temptations

I conquered all my invisible, singing and dancing temptations, except CHOCOLATE!!!!!! By: Marian Elise Marcus-James Contest: One Amazing Line

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Date: 12/16/2010 7:59:00 PM

Oh yes, singing and dancing away, those temptations... Very good. Congratulations on being among the winners of the monoku contest.

Date: 12/16/2010 3:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Date: 12/15/2010 9:40:00 AM

This is a miracle to me, and I want to thank everyone for their beautiful comments. God Bless

Date: 12/15/2010 8:54:00 AM

adorable, congrats on your win in the contest

Date: 12/15/2010 8:52:00 AM

HaHaHaHa! I just loved this one, Marian. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Date: 12/15/2010 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-earned win in the contest, Marian. Peace and joy! Love, Audrey

Date: 12/15/2010 4:03:00 AM

Congratulations Marian on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

Date: 12/14/2010 9:55:00 PM

Congratulations, Marian on your fine win in the contest! LUv, andrea

Date: 12/14/2010 7:45:00 PM

Congrats Marian on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line.. enjoy your top ten sweet victory with luv..

Date: 12/14/2010 6:00:00 PM

Congratulations Marian on your worthy poem's honor, in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Date: 12/14/2010 2:44:00 PM

Many congratulations Marian on your win in Constance's fine contest >> James

Date: 12/6/2010 10:48:00 AM

I can so relate, Marian...Good luck in the contest... now I'm craving some chocolate! lol Always, Audrey

Date: 12/6/2010 8:35:00 AM

lol, great write and thank you for the smile...

Date: 12/6/2010 8:26:00 AM

adorable, good luck in the contest