Temptations

I conquered all my invisible, singing and dancing temptations, except CHOCOLATE!!!!!!


By: Marian Elise Marcus-James

Contest: One Amazing Line
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Radke Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 7:59 PM
Oh yes, singing and dancing away, those temptations... Very good. Congratulations on being among the winners of the monoku contest.
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 3:11 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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December 15, 2010 at 9:40 AM
This is a miracle to me, and I want to thank everyone for their beautiful comments. God Bless
Roberts Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:54 AM
adorable, congrats on your win in the contest
Cwiak Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:52 AM
HaHaHaHa! I just loved this one, Marian. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Haick Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations on your well-earned win in the contest, Marian. Peace and joy! Love, Audrey
Brown Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 4:03 AM
Congratulations Marian on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 9:55 PM
Congratulations, Marian on your fine win in the contest! LUv, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 7:45 PM
Congrats Marian on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line.. enjoy your top ten sweet victory with luv..
Freeman Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 6:00 PM
Congratulations Marian on your worthy poem's honor, in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
Fraser Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Many congratulations Marian on your win in Constance's fine contest >> James
Haick Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 10:48 AM
I can so relate, Marian...Good luck in the contest... now I'm craving some chocolate! lol Always, Audrey
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December 6, 2010 at 8:35 AM
lol, great write and thank you for the smile...
Roberts Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 8:26 AM
adorable, good luck in the contest
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