"temptations"

Ill embrace your love into my seductive action
There for to create the perfect temptation 
I will revive a desire of obsession 
In my attraction to you

Ill revive a atmosphere surrounded  by a unthinkable satisfaction 
Would i dare to pass on to you the anxiety and transform you
Into a overwhelming victim
Or should i say concerning thoughts to you consciouness

Philosophical ideas nock on the door of my concious mind while 
I whisper in your ear phrases of love

Confess to me if you love me 
Or its just my attraction what 
drags you to temptation...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kyriakides Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 9:02 PM
Hi Joshep, really nice writing I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you. Peter K.
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October 1, 2010 at 5:32 AM
Congrates on having your poem featured this week Joshep poignant write ... love Jayne
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September 29, 2010 at 8:49 AM
JOSHEP, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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September 29, 2010 at 8:41 AM
hello! Joshep, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
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September 27, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Joshep. Love, Carol
Murphy Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 3:24 PM
very nice write enjoyed have a great weekend faleshia
Pichardo Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 10:14 PM
anorher one of yor succes romeo..
D. Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 9:08 PM
oi, tempting read haha, kick ass write. nathan"
Sweetheart Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 7:09 PM
Luv this piece Josep... a quality of passion mixed with much emotion too... almost an invitation.. your philosophical ideas knock on the door of my conscious mind while I whisper in your ear phrases of luv... poignant line to set the poem's foundation luv.. enjoyed...
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September 23, 2010 at 6:12 PM
Well done Joshep, it is all good. Enjoyed your poem. Nice nice and full of passion. Have a nice one,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Very creative and interesting thoughts on love and its feelings. joshep
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