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"temptations"

Ill embrace your love into my seductive action There for to create the perfect temptation I will revive a desire of obsession In my attraction to you Ill revive a atmosphere surrounded by a unthinkable satisfaction Would i dare to pass on to you the anxiety and transform you Into a overwhelming victim Or should i say concerning thoughts to you consciouness Philosophical ideas nock on the door of my concious mind while I whisper in your ear phrases of love Confess to me if you love me Or its just my attraction what drags you to temptation...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/13/2010 9:02:00 PM
Hi Joshep, really nice writing I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you. Peter K.
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Date: 10/1/2010 5:32:00 AM
Congrates on having your poem featured this week Joshep poignant write ... love Jayne
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:49:00 AM
JOSHEP, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:41:00 AM
hello! Joshep, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Joshep. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/25/2010 3:24:00 PM
very nice write enjoyed have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:14:00 PM
anorher one of yor succes romeo..
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Date: 9/23/2010 9:08:00 PM
oi, tempting read haha, kick ass write. nathan"
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Date: 9/23/2010 7:09:00 PM
Luv this piece Josep... a quality of passion mixed with much emotion too... almost an invitation.. your philosophical ideas knock on the door of my conscious mind while I whisper in your ear phrases of luv... poignant line to set the poem's foundation luv.. enjoyed...
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Date: 9/23/2010 6:12:00 PM
Well done Joshep, it is all good. Enjoyed your poem. Nice nice and full of passion. Have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 9/23/2010 4:47:00 PM
Very creative and interesting thoughts on love and its feelings. joshep
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