Kim Merryman Poet Dodoitsu

Temptation Wins

A basket of red yarn balls
     fell to the floor and scattered.
          Temptation was just too great -
               kitty unraveled.

4/19/17
For Francine Roberts "It's a DoDo kinda day" contest.

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Aniruddha Pathak June 27, 2021 at 4:51 AM Curiosity if not killed, kitty was unraveled, smart I say, and a worthy winner, congrats,.... again after years. My curiosity here was Dodoitsu. Kim Merryman June 27, 2021 at 5:57 PM Thank you, Aniruddha!

Kim Merryman August 8, 2019 at 12:28 PM Thank you, Richard!

Richard Lamoureux August 7, 2019 at 8:54 AM Ha ha, this is Purrfect! Kim Merryman August 8, 2019 at 12:28 PM Thank you, Richard!

James Inman July 7, 2017 at 8:37 AM A sweet, clever poem Kim.

Eve Roper May 31, 2017 at 5:12 PM Back to congratulate you on your win ~*

Paul Callus May 31, 2017 at 4:26 PM The question is: naughty or playful? :) A lovely and creative poem, Kim...a worthy winner; congratulations on this podium finish. Regards // paul

Joseph May May 31, 2017 at 5:27 AM Love the last line Kim, Congrats on your win

Kim Rodrigues May 30, 2017 at 9:19 PM Cute! Congrats, Kim!

Jan Allison May 30, 2017 at 5:28 PM really entertaining Kim:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight May 30, 2017 at 4:29 PM Perfect kitty trap, Kim! Too hard to ignore. Enjoyed your Dodoitsu, and congratulations on your fine podium placement! Hugs, Sandra

Sneha Rv May 17, 2017 at 7:38 AM Haha how cute! Congratulations on your lovely win :))

Ralph Sergi April 30, 2017 at 8:41 AM Very well crafted, Kim. My compliments!

Charlotte Puddifoot April 29, 2017 at 6:01 AM such a cute dodoitsu for the contest! thank you for my placement in your contest :)

Joanna Daniel April 23, 2017 at 9:41 AM I like this one, Kim:) naughty kitty, ha ha:)

Eve Roper April 20, 2017 at 11:44 PM This is awesome, Kim, little dogs love to do it also.. :) good luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich April 20, 2017 at 8:48 PM oh this is SO cute. I love it, Kim!!