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Temptation Wins

A basket of red yarn balls fell to the floor and scattered. Temptation was just too great - kitty unraveled. 4/19/17 For Francine Roberts "It's a DoDo kinda day" contest.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 6/27/2021 4:51:00 AM

Curiosity if not killed, kitty was unraveled, smart I say, and a worthy winner, congrats,.... again after years. My curiosity here was Dodoitsu.

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/27/2021 5:57:00 PM

Thank you, Aniruddha!

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/8/2019 12:28:00 PM

Thank you, Richard!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/7/2019 8:54:00 AM

Ha ha, this is Purrfect!

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/8/2019 12:28:00 PM

Thank you, Richard!

James Inman

Date: 7/7/2017 8:37:00 AM

A sweet, clever poem Kim.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/31/2017 5:12:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win ~*

Paul Callus

Date: 5/31/2017 4:26:00 PM

The question is: naughty or playful? :) A lovely and creative poem, Kim...a worthy winner; congratulations on this podium finish. Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 5/31/2017 5:27:00 AM

Love the last line Kim, Congrats on your win

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/30/2017 9:19:00 PM

Cute! Congrats, Kim!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/30/2017 5:28:00 PM

really entertaining Kim:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/30/2017 4:29:00 PM

Perfect kitty trap, Kim! Too hard to ignore. Enjoyed your Dodoitsu, and congratulations on your fine podium placement! Hugs, Sandra

Sneha Rv

Date: 5/17/2017 7:38:00 AM

Haha how cute! Congratulations on your lovely win :))

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/30/2017 8:41:00 AM

Very well crafted, Kim. My compliments!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/29/2017 6:01:00 AM

such a cute dodoitsu for the contest! thank you for my placement in your contest :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/23/2017 9:41:00 AM

I like this one, Kim:) naughty kitty, ha ha:)

Niall Fulham

Date: 4/21/2017 6:13:00 PM

Hi Kim, ha lovely :))) hugs from Ireland

Eve Roper

Date: 4/20/2017 11:44:00 PM

This is awesome, Kim, little dogs love to do it also.. :) good luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2017 8:48:00 PM

oh this is SO cute. I love it, Kim!!