Temptation

Be circumspect in Wading into temptation Steer clear of that danger zone For the devil is Always waiting to trap you Wade not into temptation Date written and posted: 12/05/2017

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Silent One

Date: 12/7/2017 6:35:00 AM

Indeed he is.. well said.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/9/2017 9:04:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/6/2017 7:44:00 PM

Edward, I must admit that I was tempted to read your Monoku because of its title 'Temptation' and I'm glad I gave in.. this is a deep write full of wisdom and truth. Beautifully expressed poetry!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/6/2018 9:15:00 AM

Hi Susan, thanks for appreciating my poem, 'Temptation'! Just so you know, I've turned it from a monoku into a Sedoka:-) Have a blessed day!*Hugs*

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/9/2017 9:04:00 AM

I'm glad you surrendered to it , Susan:-) I truly appreciate your compliments!*Hugs*