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Temptation

T ~ is for the twist and turns I made to get you girl E ~ be the excitement of picking your red rose M ~ makes for a magical mystery carpet ride P ~ for the powerful urge to kiss you and not question why T ~ is telling me," don’t you worry, it’s OK" A ~ means take advantage before it’s too late T ~ comes back around to taunt, "it's alright" I ~ say I must taste your sweet delights O ~ means open up, I'm coming in... after all what's the sin N ~ is a natural desire from our soul within

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Date: 1/27/2020 11:06:00 AM
Very nice its romantic nice music also. Thank you for your feedback on my poetry
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Date: 1/24/2020 9:15:00 AM
A Passionate, clever poem, such a wonderful alluring projection of charm and poetic talent. Well penned my friend, Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/22/2020 4:23:00 AM
Romantic and desirable... salute alkas
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Date: 1/17/2020 9:39:00 AM
Ah, you bloom a rose like nobodies business here, dear poet. Here in my heart I hear the music of your charms and it disables and enables, both love and romance. Sweet sweet sweet !
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Arturo Michael
Date: 1/21/2020 2:32:00 AM
It's temptation... A happy New Year to you Pixie...as the world turns...
Date: 1/16/2020 12:50:00 PM
Hello Arturo Micheal, this is so romantic. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/17/2020 2:36:00 PM
Hello Arturo Micheal, well it is a good play on words. Happy New Yea\ar to you.Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 1/16/2020 6:01:00 PM
Well not so romantic...a little play on the word "temptation" Happy New Year to you... I'm really glad you're here...it's a lot warmer
Date: 1/16/2020 12:28:00 PM
Just saw the comments, I've too hit the blank wall. Nice romantic acrostic Arturo Happy New year. Tom
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Arturo Michael
Date: 1/16/2020 5:58:00 PM
And a blank wall can be lonely... Happy New year Tom...Glad you're here...
Date: 1/16/2020 12:00:00 PM
Excellent my friend...great acrostic Arturo...now I tempted to write a poem lol...all the best my friend...^WW^ :o)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 1/16/2020 5:55:00 PM
You should be tempted to write... to say it as you see it... Happy New Year to you...So good to see you here...
Date: 1/16/2020 10:11:00 AM
temptation is delightful when the heart and soul are involved... beautifully romantic write from your pen Arturo :) hugs
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Arturo Michael
Date: 1/16/2020 10:22:00 AM
I haven't been around lately to wish you Love health and prosperity for 2020... Thank you Sandra, all the best
Date: 1/16/2020 8:49:00 AM
Wow!!! I LOVE this beautiful, romantic poem, Arturo! This is instant gold, and it's going in the fave file for sure. It's the best Acrostic poem I've read on PSoup ... and I've read plenty good ones. This is my choice for POTD. Love and many blessings for the new year.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 1/16/2020 10:13:00 AM
Happy New Year to you Freddie...Glad to see you here...All the best for 2020... I like the way you expressed yourself in your latest poem
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/16/2020 8:52:00 AM
Btw ... that writer's block bug has bitten us poets all a time or two. My personal remedy is the Unabridged Dictionary at my work desk feet. Love and more love always.
Date: 1/16/2020 6:46:00 AM
Very romantic write, Arturo!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 1/16/2020 7:17:00 AM
Hi, Vijay...happy new year to you...I lost the feeling of words for awhile...but I think I'm OK now...All the best

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