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'temporary Raindrops'

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between the raindrops
I can still feel the sun’s heat
it will shine again

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Carol Sunshine Brown

September 21, 2011 at 2:51 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Any Haiku Will Do" Wilma. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

September 18, 2011 at 11:14 AM

great double meaning here. congratulations on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 18, 2011 at 9:28 AM

CONGRATS WILMA ON SUPER 7TH PLACE WIN ..LUV..GREAT WORDS OF HAIKU..

David Williams

September 18, 2011 at 6:18 AM

Wilma congrats on your geat win..David

Poet Destroyer A

September 18, 2011 at 3:51 AM

Wilam,,, hi! A wonderful congratulations on your any Haiku will do win, :D. Thank you so much for entering and sharing your poem.Thanks for supporting my contest,, God bless,... LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

April 6, 2011 at 2:46 PM

Love this one. Nice to see two from you today, my friend!

James Fraser

April 6, 2011 at 11:20 AM

Love the thoughts put into this poem Wilma, it's lovely.....:)

Harry Horsman

April 6, 2011 at 7:56 AM

Beautiful Wilma, i'm afraid the spaces between the raindrops are in dire straits here, we have had 20 minutes of rain in 2011 so far. hope you re well. Harry

Kash Poet

April 6, 2011 at 6:57 AM

Excellent message here Wilma!Enjoyed---kashinath

Robert A. Dufresne

April 6, 2011 at 5:30 AM

Positively hope filled, Wilma, in few words.(and here I am writing this when I SHOULD be at work!) see what yu started! :-)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 5, 2011 at 9:57 PM

Ah no wonder Michael was inspired by this-- this is really such an uplifting write --love how you put in that sunshine between the raindrops :) just beautiful outlook on life! :) hugs to you :)

Carolyn Devonshire

April 5, 2011 at 3:50 PM

Even on the darkest day, heaven's light finds a way into our hearts. Keen insight in this haiku, Wilma. Wish everyone would realize that troubled times can end and be replaced by sunshine. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

April 5, 2011 at 1:49 PM

Yes it will my sweet friend... It always does, we just have to make sure our hearts and bodies are out in the open to feel it... Thanks for the sweet comment on "Sorry", Im afraid this person won't see or here these words.. SOmetimes we cross lines in life where there is no forgiveness.. Its something I carry inside that appears every once in a while... love your thoughts today.. love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 5, 2011 at 12:08 PM

Imaginative picture u painted Wilma ..seeing the sun while still raining.. we have torrents of rain today and visualizing the sun in my mind from your lovely words.. shining..

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 5, 2011 at 7:40 AM

Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry Wilma. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

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