temporary patches

hastily the holes patched
as the governor's parade passes -
at dusk, cracks yawn again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Empress Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 2:00 AM
This is deep! I feel like youv touched a very strong subject here using nature to express! Alot of things in life seems to make me think! Ah the irony! Pleasure reading you today ~ Sending you light always
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 8:07 PM
I really like this imagery
Griffiths Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 8:13 AM
I like the play on words with the crack of dawn, turned into "cracks yawn". Very interesting!
Kauffman Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 11:01 AM
So very poignant, Akham! Trying to cover up reality for show never is successful. I loved this poem. Well said. Blessings to you.
Andresen Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 9:57 AM
- Maybe not a Haiku ... but great writing, Akham :) - hugs
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