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Temples Of Candlelight

Without pause, she chased questions beyond shifting, twilight moods. A flickered breath, an emblazoned soliloquy drifted aflame, Later, I showered her with temples of candlelight and roses To nette onclaud--- Sijo In A Temple 1 May2014 From Leon Datu

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Date: 6/30/2014 6:42:00 PM
wow!!!!! this is so sweeeeeet!!!!!!! your two last lines are so catchy.. :D
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Date: 5/15/2014 9:44:00 PM
what phrasing most eloquent!! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 5/14/2014 8:57:00 AM
Leon, wow.. I love this! Your pen has the right touch and is a winning write to be sure, congrats!
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:28:00 PM
LEON , Congratulations, in NETTE's, "SIJO IN A TEMPLE " awesome contest. <3 Love * LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2014 12:45:00 PM
goodnes, isn't it great to bring the romance back after a fight?.. so well constructed and different,leon...congrats on your fine win in my contest.. huggs
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Date: 5/13/2014 7:47:00 AM
Great work Leon ! Congrats on a very well written sijo n a wonderful win !
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Date: 5/12/2014 9:06:00 PM
Impressive imagery..Congratulations on the win, Leon
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Date: 5/12/2014 2:13:00 PM
Awesome Work, Leon! Congratulations, on your win!
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Date: 5/1/2014 2:36:00 PM
Ooh very moving. Good Luck in the contest :) greats words :)
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