Temples of Candlelight

Without pause, she chased questions beyond shifting, twilight moods. 
A flickered breath, an emblazoned soliloquy drifted aflame,
Later, I showered her with temples of candlelight and roses



To nette onclaud--- Sijo In A Temple
1 May2014
From Leon Datu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 6:42 PM
wow!!!!! this is so sweeeeeet!!!!!!! your two last lines are so catchy.. :D
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:44 PM
what phrasing most eloquent!! Congrats for your win.
A   Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 1:28 PM
LEON , Congratulations, in NETTE's, "SIJO IN A TEMPLE " awesome contest. <3 Love * LINDA
Onclaud Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 12:45 PM
goodnes, isn't it great to bring the romance back after a fight?.. so well constructed and different,leon...congrats on your fine win in my contest.. huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Great work Leon ! Congrats on a very well written sijo n a wonderful win !
Mehta Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 9:06 PM
Impressive imagery..Congratulations on the win, Leon
Lee Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Awesome Work, Leon! Congratulations, on your win!
Nance Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Ooh very moving. Good Luck in the contest :) greats words :)
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