Tempest

TEMPEST

Twin limestone tors thrust up through valley floor
Like isles or icebergs in a calm flat sea
Deep green save where shear rock can hold no spore
To spawn in fecund niche a vine or tree

Midday and all is calm untroubled, still
In tactile heat, all movement paused, restricted
No hint of ought that might disturb our will
A landscape placid, as in paint depicted

But look to sky the seeds of change are sown
There, signs portend a transformation near
Those gentle clouds mere cumuli have grown
To cumulonimbus, thrust t'ward stratosphere

And therein is enormous might enclosed
Stored energy, that soon must be released
Unleashing primal power unopposed
The laws of Nature never to be breached

Now lightning flickers o'er far mountain peaks
Faint thunder echoes round steep valley walls
The breeze accelerates and chills to speak
A warning of the fast approaching  squall

The charge in air: has swallows energised
To move from circling low ‘tween tree and house
Their flight plans now are recklessly revised 
To helix soaring t'ward the threatening clouds

A steady light drum roll on roofs - sound train
Starts gently then crescendo ends the prelude
Announcing clear the now impending rain
Prodigious splashes transformed to a deluge

The waves of rain traverse our panorama
Gauze curtains drawn by cosmic stage hand's might
Relentless, recasting features as of dark drama
Familiar scenes are shrouded, hid from sight

Now random electric arcs flare bleak view scanned
Cacophony of thunder rules all sound
Awesome darkness and confusion on the land
All visual anchors cast in shade spellbound

But in this world each cycle must be ended
Perhaps reverse events that had us unmoored
The drama, soon is played out and expended
Peace, light and order gradually restored

Known reference points can once again be seen
The twin rock peaks come clear through rain-washed air
Clouds make fine-spun white wraps for hills now green
We're reassured by prospects known and fair

Is this chronicle an allegoric tale
Of human life not granted free of strife
Would we choose bland existence without travail
Or fain confront the magnificent storms of life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 4:07 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Geoffrey ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 3:04 AM
A brilliant first post and i love the vocabulary, which helps create images for this poem... A great first post.. This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 8:30 AM
You have skills. I enjoyed reading your first piece here. I think James Burns captured my thoughts with his eloquent comment.
Burns Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Another tantalizing treat for the tongue Mr. Brewer!!! I encourage those who indulge in your work to read it aloud, they will find themselves better for having done so. You have the talent of tone and timing so evidenced by the way the words roll effortlessly off the tongue on the initial tasting. Well Done, nuff said...
Brewer Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 4:40 PM
Thank you for your eloquent and valued comments - much appreciated.
Hoffman Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 9:18 AM
Awesome metaphor Geoffrey; comparing parts of our strife filled lives to a tempest! Enjoyed!~Che :)
Brewer Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 4:41 PM
Thank you so much Cheryl. I am very glad you enjoyed it
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