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Tempest

white-capped waves dance on an angry sea,
                    as the tempest grows in intensity.



  written 9/29/11  for Brian Strand's Succinct contest.

Copyright © Kim Merryman | Year Posted 2011

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December 4, 2011 at 3:27 AM

Congrats on you win. Sorry, enjoyed lately.

Charlotte Puddifoot

December 3, 2011 at 4:26 PM

nice euphony and visual in this one, congrats on your HM :-)

Lori Lucas Mcclure

December 1, 2011 at 7:26 PM

Congratulations on your placement with this wonderful write! Lori

Robert A. Dufresne

December 1, 2011 at 6:01 AM

got a nice visual on this one Kim. Congrats to youon the HM

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 1, 2011 at 5:32 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Succinct" contest Kim. Love, Carol

December 1, 2011 at 3:08 AM

Nice imagery:Congrats Kim on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

November 30, 2011 at 9:48 PM

I like this, Kim. Congrats on the HM.

November 30, 2011 at 2:06 PM

Very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

November 30, 2011 at 1:06 PM

Nice going kim, Beautiful poem, Congratulations on your honor. Agape, Moses

November 29, 2011 at 8:02 AM

Good luck in the contest.

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