Tempered

Full of hate
Or full of pain

The result
Tis oft the same
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashford Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 2:45 PM
Wise and neat.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 7:24 AM
Thank you! :) xomo
Kiser Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 5:27 PM
How profound! So true this is. Well done.
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June 26, 2019 at 7:15 AM
<3
Wolf Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 9:13 PM
This resonates sooooooooooo much with me. Having been through some extreme pain over the past 5 years, now whenever someone over 60 is a little brusque with my 22 and 23 year old sons, I always say, "Perhaps he's in pain." It's an automatic response now.... This is zing-zingery zing-zingeroo sharp, my dear! Kudos. :) gw
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June 24, 2019 at 6:43 AM
I didn't post it, I'm glad I did. :) I've had a long and varied relationship with pain myself. I think hate is the hard edge of pain. Thank you my Wolf Man, xomo <3
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 7:41 AM
That’s why I oft look past the pain for the cause...love them. Perhaps she/he will soften
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 6:38 AM
Compassion, difinitively x
Michael Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 4:00 AM
They are twins...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 6:24 AM
Mistaken for each other... x
Cholt Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 6:05 PM
Very true. Where hate is, pain often follows.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 6:23 AM
They both take their toll. xomo
Connelly Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 6:04 PM
Simply stated but simply true Maureen.
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June 22, 2019 at 6:22 AM
Thank you! (true: nobody can follow me when I get complicated ;)
Faulkner Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 4:20 PM
I think of hate as poison that ultimately sickens you if you swallow it - this is a gem of a poem!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 6:20 AM
That's about right, lest you follow it with a shot of empathy ;) thank you! xomo
Cunningham Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 1:35 PM
So very true Maureen. Tom
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 6:17 AM
Not me of course. ;) xomo
Romios Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 10:17 AM
You got that right! Panagiota
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June 22, 2019 at 6:14 AM
;D xomo!
Toney Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 9:22 AM
Very thought-provoking, Maureen, and the title is brilliant! ~Mark
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 6:13 AM
Thank you you Mark! I love when I can get all the use out of a word ;) xomo!
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