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Temperature Rising

At any moment spring might arrive Be prepared with a light jacket in hand Can you feel the cold wind running away? Dance with me as the meadows turn green Enjoy the sounds of streams as they thaw Feel the warmth of the sun on your face Great days are about to begin Happiness returns with the singing of the birds. I love how the coming of spring makes me feel Jumping up out of bed anxious to greet a new day Kissing your eyelids to wake you up Let's go for a walk Maybe we will even see a glimpse of summer today! Now is the very best time to greet the day On days like this People seem so much happier Quietly taking in the moment Rising just that little bit earlier So that they can enjoy nature coming back to life Trading winter clothing for optimistic shorts Underestimating winter's resilience Variable temperature seem the order of the day Wise people keep warm clothing close at hand X X X OOO, I see there is a better way to keep warm! Yes this is the time of year for lovers Zero degrees and the temperature is rising! For Shadow's Abecedarian contest. February 13, 2015.

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Date: 4/2/2015 8:15:00 AM
Lovely! I too love spring!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/2/2015 8:51:00 AM
Today is a gorgeous spring day here in Kelowna. I am looking forward to my day. I hope spring has sprung where you are as well.
Date: 3/4/2015 4:21:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 3/2/2015 1:14:00 AM
Awesome,, one of ur very best Richard! springy jiggly n uplifting write,, congrats on ur win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2015 7:19:00 AM
Thanks Upma.
Date: 2/28/2015 7:43:00 PM
sweet sweet sweet!!! Congrats and I'm glad I finally got to see this springy poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2015 7:20:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 2/28/2015 8:17:00 AM
Congrats, Richard: I love your version of spring.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2015 8:20:00 AM
Thanks Ralph.
Date: 2/28/2015 3:14:00 AM
This was wonderfully romantic Richard! Congrats on your win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thanks Connie.
Date: 2/27/2015 11:25:00 PM
amazing win. SKAT
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 2/27/2015 9:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. 7 Blessings dear friend
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 2/27/2015 8:02:00 AM
good attempt Rick sorry I can not accept Your X line xxx ooo, cost you lots of valuable points hugs
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/27/2015 2:25:00 PM
it is slang Rick not in English dictionary hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2015 9:21:00 AM
Why not?
Date: 2/27/2015 6:49:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Richard:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2015 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 2/15/2015 2:19:00 AM
This was lovely, Richard. You took the form to a whole new level of nice. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2015 6:24:00 AM
Hugs back, I hope your day is more relaxing. What is the subject of your thesis?
Date: 2/14/2015 8:04:00 AM
This is a great entry for the contest. I love how you played with it...anticipating the joys of coming spring, then deciding to revel in the last romantic winter moments.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Monterey, this form is difficult to maintain a coherent line of thought.
Date: 2/13/2015 11:44:00 PM
This is so beautiful, well, I have to be the devil and counter it!!!!! Great write Richard! I do promise a rising temperature though!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 1:26:00 AM
Bring the heat Arthur!
Date: 2/13/2015 9:46:00 PM
A sweet spring bursting with romance! Love those last few lines...hugs, Rhonda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 1:26:00 AM
Thanks Rhonda.
Date: 2/13/2015 10:27:00 AM
To my friends, if I have not responded to your comments please forgive me. For some reason I have not been receiving notifications from poetry soup for a couple of days. I checked my setting and they all seem to be correct.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/13/2015 9:44:00 PM
We're all having the same problem...frustrating. :(
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/13/2015 1:32:00 PM
I as well as many others are having the same problem.. I tried emailing PS but it was sent back as undeliverable
Date: 2/13/2015 9:23:00 AM
Brilliantly penned Richard I especially like the x lol:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2015 10:29:00 AM
I am fond of kisses as well. Hugs a a big x to you as well.
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2015 9:26:00 AM
soup mail xx
Date: 2/13/2015 9:08:00 AM
- A pleasure to look forward to beautiful spring - Good luck with your lovely poem in the contest, hope you will win - I wish you a romantic Valentine's Day, and a beautiful weekend Richard ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2015 10:31:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise! Hugs to you too.
Date: 2/13/2015 9:07:00 AM
I was beginning to think you had cabin fever..lol...there will be a lot of heat this weekend... Great job with the form. I didn't ever realize it until after I finished the poem
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2015 10:45:00 AM
Thanks Tim.
Date: 2/13/2015 9:07:00 AM
Hey Richard, such a lovely tribute to a powerful season. Deep expression and wonderful to read. Thanks for sharing it. Be Blessed, Neva
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2015 10:46:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and blessing.;0)
Date: 2/13/2015 8:46:00 AM
I love love your poem Richard..Makes me think of all that is bright and beautiful..On a Winter day yet it feels like Spring ishere..Lovely!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2015 11:52:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine.;0)
Date: 2/13/2015 8:40:00 AM
nice pen Richard... love the flow ... best wishes, nad!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2015 11:53:00 AM
Thanks for being the first to comment.

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