Temper Tantrum

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Benny B was well known as a crowder
And today craved a bowl of clam chowder
The waitress with a frown
Said "the chowder's all gone"
Ben threw a tantrum, whining all the louder

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Poetry notes:
11/08/2018

Miriam Webster - Definition of "crowder"
1: One that plays a crowd 2. (dialectal, England) :Fiddler
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Benny B was well known as a crowder And today he craved a bowl of clam chowder The waitress with a frown Said "the chowder's all gone" Ben threw a tantrum, whining all the louder

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/11/2018 9:19:00 PM

Funny, reminds me of someone as well.

Mark Toney
Date: 11/11/2018 10:46:00 PM

Lol... probably one in every crowd :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/8/2018 5:14:00 PM

A fun poem, Mark. I love clam chowder so I totally understand Benny's reaction.

Mark Toney
Date: 11/9/2018 12:54:00 AM

Lol... Speaking up for Benny. I like it :)

Temper Tantrum

Benny B was well known as a crowder And today craved a bowl of clam chowder The waitress with a frown Said "the chowder's all gone" Ben threw a tantrum, whining all the louder

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Benny B was well known as a crowder
And today craved a bowl of clam chowder
The waitress with a frown
Said "the chowder's all gone"
Ben threw a tantrum, whining all the louder