Telluric Love

I desire you so much that
          when one day turn
            dust, I will visit your
              dust to create
                mounds of powder
                   around...
                    It will be a love
                     tellurian ...
                      telluric
                        love !
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August 1, 2019 at 8:46 AM
As far as I understand, it will be short circuits, sparks, lightnings and St. Elmo's fire. Oh, those telluric Brazilian poets whose words give a reader the electrified pleasure)
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August 3, 2019 at 6:25 AM
The effect of the earth affects the poetical atmosphere and so in human nature. Forces of telluric currents infiltrate the thinking and modus operandi of the poets; So did my poetry salute dear Kurt, alkas  
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July 30, 2019 at 11:29 PM
Truly WOW Alkas. I have to admit I needed to look up what "telluric" was; but as soon as I read the definition I thought of Tesla. And as I read you poem the Natural Earthly energy flowed. Brilliant and inspiring Alkas. Thanks.
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August 3, 2019 at 6:29 AM
Telluric forces influence poetical production. Being dust, I'm Earth, so more and more influenced by these forces .. Love telluric like this is done ... salute and thanks my friend Jeff alkas  
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