Telling the Story

The drums could be heard far away
across the savannah they travelled
spreading, telling the awful news

One village drums talking to another
as much as fifty or so miles away
dreadful news they told the listeners

Of the worst drought in living memory
people dying like flies with thirst
animals stuck in mud trying to reach

The last few drops of brackenish water
bloated carcass's everywhere you look
hopeless in people's eyes watching

The drums beat ever louder and faster
but no help can they bring to sufferers
only water can do that, can rejuvenate

Bring back life, and fresh greenery for all
now the drum tone changes becomes insistent
rain two hundred miles away will it reach?

Soon the rivers burst their banks flooding
in what seems an instance all springs back
that life saving water has rejuvenated all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Young Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 4:18 PM
This is a great read! Very dramatic, and heartbreaking descriptions. Nice work :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 4:32 AM
Gina hi and ty for your time reading Shadow x
Gadzunheit Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 12:14 PM
Marvelous piece, Linda! I love the excitement of it and the drums playing loudly! Excellent story!
Hamilton Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 12:19 PM
hi Theresa tnx for taking time to read glad you enjoyed Shadow
Ginesi Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 3:43 AM
Hi Linda, Did you actually see this when you travelled Africa, it is a good interpretation of your exploits and a dramatic account through your poem, all the best. John
Hamilton Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 5:42 AM
yes I did John ty for dropping by Shadow
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 6:24 PM
I like this story of rejuvenation. It sounds like you really know this place!!
A   Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 3:10 PM
Shadow, the drums telling a story.. a lovely birth. deep and sad imagery. with the dead all around. wonderful ending... xox~ LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 3:20 PM
Hi Linda as I described this does happen rain as much as 300 - 400 miles away can cause flash floods and all ravines to fill and flow wondrous sight and in under 24 hours green springing up everywhere. See that and you believe in rebirth Shadow
Cee Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 10:31 AM
beautiful written Shadow...:)
Hamilton Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 3:16 PM
ty Elai that means a lot to me Shadow x
De Paz Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 7:59 AM
Those drums are really impressive. Their sound overwhelms the images of death behind one of the greatest tragedies of humanity: the lack of fresh water which only rain can win.... when occurs. My compliments
Hamilton Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 10:01 AM
ty Mario drought is a terrible thing a certain charity make things worse by fencing off water then complain when elephants in desperation pull it down. Why not build a watering hole too? on my box lol Shadow x
Msane Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 7:18 AM
Beautiful poem Shadow, it restores hope and faith
Hamilton Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 10:03 AM
then I am happy both are important things ty Shadow
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