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Telling Fairytales of She Who Wails

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She was captured by the saddening of death. My granddaughter Ava Rose ( 3 years old)

Melting my heart with flames of heated sorrow As I watch her sweet tears, I tissue my eyes Indeed, she is not the only one who cries Assuring my precious...a brighter tomorrow Explaining to her, a soul never dies Patting her back with her head on my shoulder Fairytales live, child...forever and ever She will understand life more when she grows older Brightening her face, from her eyes stormy weather She had smiled a great smile, from the last thing I told her Humpty Dumpty, will be put back together *Telling Fairytales of She Who Wails 1-27-2020

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 2/25/2020 7:23:00 PM

Wonderful write about your precious granddaughter on such a delicate subject. Congrats on your win. Hugs

Lu Loo

Date: 2/23/2020 10:56:00 AM

wait a minute, I meant to give you 1st, I will go change it now. So sorry, must have pressed wrong number. thanks - luloo

Charles Messina
Date: 2/26/2020 5:46:00 AM

You are too kind, Luloo :) Thank you so much for the wonderful placement, and for taking the time to change it. I would have been humbled with a 2nd place too! X:-)

Lu Loo
Date: 2/23/2020 10:58:00 AM

ok, just changed it. Sorry again... Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. X:-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/28/2020 9:21:00 PM

Very touching, Charles!

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/28/2020 9:58:00 AM

So sad memories... Emotional Charles..

Charles Messina
Date: 1/28/2020 10:20:00 AM

Hi Jenish, yes sad...but with a happy ending :o) Thank you for visiting :)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/27/2020 6:22:00 PM

Hello Charles … sad indeed, yes as you wrote in your verse, time will eventually form an understanding - thank you Charles - Lindsay

Charles Messina
Date: 1/28/2020 10:18:00 AM

Hello Lindsay my dear friend. time will heel sadness :) Thank you. Charlie

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/27/2020 1:22:00 PM

Hi Charlie, what a touching write! Icoukd just see you two_ such tenderness.... Panagiota xx

Charles Messina
Date: 1/28/2020 10:17:00 AM

Hi Panagiota, she is precious. I just found out that I will be a grandfather for the 5th time...come late may :) Thank you so much.. Hugs Charlie

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/27/2020 10:39:00 AM

Hi Charlie, This is a wonderful poem and I love the ending. Your poems have such great meter and flow and I really like your rhyme scheme.

Charles Messina
Date: 1/28/2020 10:16:00 AM

Hey Sam, thank you so much for the awesome compliments. Much appreciated my friend :o) CM