Charles Messina Poet Rhyme

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She was captured by the saddening of death. My granddaughter Ava Rose ( 3 years old) 

Telling Fairytales of She Who Wails

Melting my heart with flames of heated sorrow 
As I watch her sweet tears, I tissue my eyes 
Indeed, she is not the only one who cries 
Assuring my precious...a brighter tomorrow 
Explaining to her, a soul never dies 

Patting her back with her head on my shoulder 
Fairytales live, child...forever and ever 
She will understand life more when she grows older 
Brightening her face, from her eyes stormy weather 
She had smiled a great smile, from the last thing I told her
Humpty Dumpty, will be put back together  


*Telling Fairytales of She Who Wails  
1-27-2020

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Cecilia Macfarlane February 25, 2020 at 7:23 PM Wonderful write about your precious granddaughter on such a delicate subject. Congrats on your win. Hugs

Beautiful Scars February 23, 2020 at 10:56 AM wait a minute, I meant to give you 1st, I will go change it now. So sorry, must have pressed wrong number. thanks - luloo Charles Messina February 26, 2020 at 5:46 AM You are too kind, Luloo :) Thank you so much for the wonderful placement, and for taking the time to change it. I would have been humbled with a 2nd place too! X:-) Beautiful Scars February 23, 2020 at 10:58 AM ok, just changed it. Sorry again... Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. X:-)

Kim Rodrigues January 28, 2020 at 9:21 PM Very touching, Charles!

Jenish Somadas January 28, 2020 at 9:58 AM So sad memories... Emotional Charles.. Charles Messina January 28, 2020 at 10:20 AM Hi Jenish, yes sad...but with a happy ending :o) Thank you for visiting :)

Lindsay Laurie January 27, 2020 at 6:22 PM Hello Charles … sad indeed, yes as you wrote in your verse, time will eventually form an understanding - thank you Charles - Lindsay Charles Messina January 28, 2020 at 10:18 AM Hello Lindsay my dear friend. time will heel sadness :) Thank you. Charlie

Panagiota Romios January 27, 2020 at 1:22 PM Hi Charlie, what a touching write! Icoukd just see you two_ such tenderness.... Panagiota xx Charles Messina January 28, 2020 at 10:17 AM Hi Panagiota, she is precious. I just found out that I will be a grandfather for the 5th time...come late may :) Thank you so much.. Hugs Charlie

Sam Kauffman January 27, 2020 at 10:39 AM Hi Charlie, This is a wonderful poem and I love the ending. Your poems have such great meter and flow and I really like your rhyme scheme. Charles Messina January 28, 2020 at 10:16 AM Hey Sam, thank you so much for the awesome compliments. Much appreciated my friend :o) CM