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Tell Me No Lies

Continue saying the truth
blind no one with lies 
for one day that 
truth you held back 
will be the poison that 
pierces your insides.

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Chris Boskovski

Date: 8/29/2013 8:00:00 PM

Wow Madelin I can't stop reading your great and outstanding poetry. You have a deep heart. You pertain to an everyday that everyone has, and that is to hear no lies. I never want to hear a lie, just tell me the truth straight forward, because i'd never lie to you. I love this poem, because in such few words you explained something so wonderfully big and you did it so well! Great job Madelin! Keep it up! I love it! from your new fan and fellow poet Christopher Boskovski! xoxoxo!!! :)

Madelin Barton
Date: 8/30/2013 1:54:00 PM

Truth hurts my friend sometimes more than we can handle; but we learn to cope and it frees us but a lie festers and continues to grow spreading more dishonesty and in the long run hurts even more thank you for your kind words and for reading my poetry God Bless

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 8/25/2013 3:48:00 PM

Whoa, whatever happen to "ask me no questions and I'll tell you no lies" LOL! Well I won't lie here, this is another good poem with a very good moral! MC

Madelin Barton
Date: 8/26/2013 5:52:00 PM

Thank you again enjoy your comments friend and fellow poet

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