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Tell Me America

Tell me America , Will you win this war ? Will you bring cruelty to gallows ? I see you daily here; Left and right like pendulum, Ups and downs like leaf-cutters, Building army, building allies, Pacing faster on trick’s ladder; Still this monster is gargantuan, Like phoenix looks its soul, Like elixir its spirit. Storms cruelty gathers daily The brutish it breeds like hornets, Their fangs like shoemakers' hammers; Making hell of every metre That I am affraid America; From which hedge will you strike, From which side will you come ; To bring brutality to its knee? The day mother bought a hen And let it loose for airing a bit No sooner it met the brutish Than the cruel scraped its head With their vampire’s aching-pecks. On their feast of bear your fangs; The green were shredded like young okra, And the gray like potato chips; Every foot wore sock of red ; That an aged man sermonised : Monster's world , young as the day is , Lions have made morsel of antelopes. Who shall tame the lions ? Who shall safe the necks of the antelopes ? Tell me America, will you win this war ? Will you bring cruelty to gallows ? Will you tame the lions and cage the peckers ? The lions are roaring everywhere and there, The noise is becoming louder and deafening Worldly peace in monsters' cage , tell me, And please be eloquent; will you win this war Or do we start decorating crowns for terrors ?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/1/2014 1:23:00 AM
I think big business and greedy people are the cruel ones these days. And it trickles down to others. I like this. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 11/1/2014 2:41:00 PM
Thank you Andrea,nice to hear from you.
Date: 10/30/2014 8:47:00 AM
A very strong write Kayode. It is hard to know that so many people are hurting and suffering every day and many of us feel helpless. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/1/2014 2:41:00 PM
Thank you Brenda,nice to hear from you.
Date: 10/29/2014 8:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, love this write.
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Date: 11/1/2014 2:40:00 PM
Thank you Maurice,nice to hear from you.
Date: 10/29/2014 8:05:00 PM
a hard hitting one here to end my contest - you get the message across in striking, bold language (just a few little grammatical issues, nothing major) I just had to place this for its important message and no-holds-barred delivery, some good similes too - congrats on your win in my contest
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Date: 10/29/2014 11:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Charlotte for the contest and placement. I'm really happy to be part of this contest;you can however make someone better if you would not mind to correct the noted ''grammatical issues''.Have a wonderful day.

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