Laura Wilmot Poet Rhyme

Tell Me

You tell me you've been hurt, in more ways than one,
But don't condemn or punish me, for things I haven't done.

Give me all of you, and not just a part;
Allow me the chance to heal your once broken heart.

In this whole world of people, you picked me from the crowd;
Only you can tell me why, so why not say it out loud?

Tell me every day that I'm beautiful, and why you care;
Say that when you see me, you can't help but stare.

I'm on the love boat, but are you on board?
Another broken heart, I just cannot afford.

So when we're apart, tell me you miss me so;
If you could change the past, you'd never have let me go.

I feel like I'm giving more than I receive;
Saying that you love me, is just too hard to believe.

Tell me without words, that your love for me is real;
It's what you do that matters, so show me how you feel.

Don't hesitate, or keep holding back your tongue;
There's nothing worse than a song that's been left unsung.

So tell me what I mean to you, show me true romance;
Tomorrow's no guarantee, and you could miss your chance.

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Richard Palmer July 19, 2012 at 4:23 PM love the flow,love the words,great write Laura Laura Wilmot July 19, 2012 at 5:10 PM Thank you, Richard! I appreciate the feedback!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 19, 2012 at 4:12 PM Well written about love Laura, a good poem. - oxox Anne-Lise Laura Wilmot July 19, 2012 at 5:09 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise! You are very sweet. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown July 11, 2012 at 12:23 PM It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Laura. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol Laura Wilmot July 19, 2012 at 5:08 PM Thank you, Carol! You are always so encouraging and inspiring. Thank you for taking the time to read my poetry, and for giving such uplifting feedback. I greatly appreciate it! :)

Vicky Tsiluma July 11, 2012 at 5:27 AM Lovely rhyme - strong message. 'tomorrow's no guarantee' -how true. Laura Wilmot July 19, 2012 at 5:07 PM Thank you, Vicky! :)

Mad Hu July 10, 2012 at 11:45 PM True.Emotions should b expressed in words too:)lovely write Laura Wilmot July 19, 2012 at 5:06 PM I agree! Both are important. :)