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I called your name before many Do your eyes see, does your ears hear me U stop to wait to satisfy my confusion Ur mind feel me but your heart fear me Who you with?...Who do u see?..your reply Maybe u heard of me I explain my emotions... U not moved by the lifestyle that chose me Can i be a prescription to your late nights confusion Ur words tell a different story to how u appear..your reply Maybe u heard of me Am allowed to compensate your heart desires Are u able to carry on when my path is to narrow to accommodate two...your reply I wanna carry on where your soul can't go through And time won...

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Date: 3/26/2024 6:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/16/2016 10:27:00 PM
Hi Kadafi, thank you for supporting my comment. That was nice of you. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/7/2016 12:39:00 AM
Kadafi Motingwa,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Kadafi Motingwa
Date: 2/8/2016 1:41:00 AM
Hi Linda..i appreciate it your comment on my poem so much
Date: 2/4/2016 6:40:00 AM
I really like this style of writing. Great poem Kadafi. A7
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Kadafi Motingwa
Date: 2/8/2016 1:42:00 AM
thank you my friend

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