Telemachus Two

(Being Part Two of Telemachus)


But they trade mindfulness 
for profit,
secret with laws dipped 
and festered -----
great feasts -----
with few of seat 
and dark their company 
in beastly caves;
always belly to the ravished earth!

Not a morsel they lack....
though they steal from pauper''s
rickety table;
taxing them, whilst they slither,
belly to the earth;
their great wagons full to the brim

For lack of want the extra-mile
grows longer, still ----
with each new appetite;
What makes the full hunger so?
'tis better the less a man needs;
his home, his wife ----
his life,
if that were not enough ----
then from death....
he builds his ministry 
and his black chapel sits midst
tombs of forgotten love

How wan the dying rose!
Once pristine thy petals where
the rains of the world quenched
thy thirst, and the earth ----
had sustained fellowship 
in thy welcoming;

Yet ye have broken the clasp.....
Into the fold ere the last breath
and limp the stroll in Lonely Wood;
to waltz the Sable ruins
and the forsaken path,

How unknown.....
yet ye believe with life thy death!

Though all is forgotten when life
is a kiss most splendid;
each morn kept more than the rest,
more sweet and lush and tended;
She is too bright for grim intentions....

Where the waterfalls leap to love
and splash upon eternal rocks;
and always their pure pools pristine
with hope, with hues rainbow,
the true spirit of The Isle!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/2/2017 3:47:00 AM
This is so impressive Keith, why your last stanza could stand alone it is so complete and so beautiful! Bravo my friend. You have become one of my favorite poets to read. Aloha, Connie 7 ; )
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/2/2017 2:10:00 PM
Connie I'm so thrilled you made my day for sure! I do love the ending too. Telemachus and Mist on the Barrows are some of my finer works; I was reluctant to post at first, but you and others have made it so worthwhile!
Date: 1/30/2017 11:36:00 PM
Wow awesomely poetic and impressive in subtle freeverse style. Your phrasing so artistic, 'how wan the dying rose, to waltz the sable ruins' and more. Sublime poetry indeed. Nice to read from your pen again , I hope u will too my latest. And hapy new yr.
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Date: 1/29/2017 4:40:00 PM
Impressed by your knowledge of the classics. Stimulating poem here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 1/29/2017 7:17:00 PM
Thanks Matt, glad you enjoyed; Greek mythology is a great way I find as a foundation to express oneself, because it is so multifaceted and full of mysteries like real life.
Date: 1/29/2017 2:02:00 PM
impressed by the progression of your imaginative tale, keith.. keep on penning..huggs
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 1/29/2017 7:20:00 PM
Thanks nette, the poem is really a metaphor of the future (today). Always appreciate your visits! Many hugs!
Date: 1/29/2017 12:57:00 PM
TRULY A MOST FITTING ADDITION TO ITS SISTER VERSES, IN PART ONE. Adding to my fav list as both are true gems....
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 1/29/2017 7:24:00 PM
Thanks Robert, I knew you would love this epic, in which I poured all my powers into; a few things I might change (only God is perfect!)
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