Teetering On the Brink

Light lusters through a leak-in-line squall, design is drenched from the downpour. Ground's thick dew began to shimmer and prism, It's within grasp of awe. withstand meager hooves ahead. I board a whirlwind of vivid cortex. teetering swelling blazes spun whirling. Tidal light wave caught me in its vortex, warmth is generated by red loading. squinting, cold in green turn to a frail blue bastion twirl to deep azure
Written: April 2nd, 2022 Checked by HMS.COM A combination of forms Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet
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George Avatar
April 7, 2022 at 8:28 PM
Great entry for the contest ! All the Best dear friend !
Pandit Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 5:19 AM
Well done in these difficult to execute forms, Lasaad.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 1:11 AM
Very well done. Great syllable count. True imagery.
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