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Teetering On the Brink

Light lusters through a leak-in-line squall, design is drenched from the downpour. Ground's thick dew began to shimmer and prism, It's within grasp of awe. withstand meager hooves ahead. I board a whirlwind of vivid cortex. teetering swelling blazes spun whirling. Tidal light wave caught me in its vortex, warmth is generated by red loading. squinting, cold in green turn to a frail blue bastion twirl to deep azure
Written: April 2nd, 2022 Checked by HMS.COM A combination of forms Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Date: 4/7/2022 8:28:00 PM
Great entry for the contest ! All the Best dear friend !
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Date: 4/3/2022 5:19:00 AM
Well done in these difficult to execute forms, Lasaad.
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Date: 4/3/2022 1:11:00 AM
Very well done. Great syllable count. True imagery.
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