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Teeter Totter Up down. "Don’t bump your bottom on the ground!" UP down. Inside the curvy tunnel is a dark, spooky space. WOOPS, I'm sorry Patrick, I could not see your face. A slippery slide we move down fast, Sarah’s arm in a cast! I love to swing with Lindsey Loo, if she swings too high she'll lose a shoe. Jack likes the tire rope the best, he just won't stop and take a rest! He will circle until he's dizzy, to make his Irish curls turn frizzy. Gertie reaches for each monkey bar, “LOOK at me” she brags. She thinks she's such a star, even I can climb that far! It’s finally time for us to go, have ice cream and take a rest. Our playground time is just the best! 6/21/2021 THE PLAYGROUND

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Date: 8/21/2021 8:28:00 PM
Your writing brings much happiness and here seizes childhood joy with vigor. Good health to you + your family. Brian
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Marikate Kingston
Date: 9/10/2021 6:57:00 PM
I'm tickled pink that so many enjoyed this poem. Thank you for nice praise.
Date: 7/3/2021 9:14:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poems. I am glad it inspired you to an optimistic stance. Regards.
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Date: 7/3/2021 4:43:00 AM
Very stylish and well crafted. Just what the doctor ordered. Keep posting and stay safe. All the best David in NZ
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Marikate Kingston
Date: 9/10/2021 11:50:00 AM
Thanks :)
Date: 7/3/2021 4:33:00 AM
Delightful ~
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Date: 6/26/2021 1:51:00 PM
This was light and fun and I enjoyed myself... wonderful write. Ann
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Date: 6/23/2021 8:15:00 AM
Marikate, this poem is excellent--enthusiastic, fun, a delightful read! Janice
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Marikate Kingston
Date: 9/10/2021 11:50:00 AM
Gosh, isn't it great praise, when someone describes your writing using the word, "excellent" Thank you! Sorry to respond weeks later, still learning how to figure this site out at times. You made me smile.
Date: 6/22/2021 7:24:00 PM
Oh, this is such a barrel of monkeys, Marikate! Love and kisses: It's a FAVE for me. Thanks! And best of luck in the contest too. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 6/22/2021 4:19:00 PM
This is so fun, Marikate, I love it...
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Marikate Kingston
Date: 9/10/2021 11:47:00 AM
Hi Eve, I feel so silly to respond to your nice comment weeks after you posted it. I loved how this turned out and I am so very glad you liked it. Still learning.
Date: 6/18/2021 1:35:00 PM
A very fun poem, Marikate! If this poem is for the playground themed poetry contest, my very best wishes for a win. :-)
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