Avery Won Poet Limerick

Teenage Romance

Together we frolic throughout the mall 
Floating on air when I suddenly fall 
I drop to my knee 
And look up to see 
You unknowingly walk into a wall 

Together we laugh because it's well known 
Falling in love makes us injury prone 
Even though your smile 
Makes it all worth while 
Maybe next time we'll just stick to the phone 

3/3/2021
(Syllable count 10 10 5 5 10, checked on PS)

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Kim Merryman July 8, 2021 at 8:01 PM Cute limericks, Avery! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Eve Roper March 21, 2021 at 8:58 PM Great limericks, Avery, congratulations! Hugs Eve Avery Won March 23, 2021 at 5:25 AM Thank you so much <3

Tania Kitchin March 20, 2021 at 4:54 PM Avery, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limericks! Avery Won March 23, 2021 at 5:26 AM Thanks, Tania :-)

Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2021 at 3:05 PM a really cute set, Avery. Congrats on the win Avery Won March 23, 2021 at 5:26 AM Thank you :-)

Jan Allison March 19, 2021 at 4:21 PM good one Avery, many congrats on your win :-) hugs jan xx Avery Won March 23, 2021 at 5:26 AM Thank you, Jan :-)