Teenage Drama

Afraid to face reality
That it might prove unpleasant
Scared to be cheated
And hurt by deception
Hiding in seclusion
In my own private world
Plunging into a vast sea
Of pleasurable memories
Swimming with unfolding waves
Of fiction and dreams
Shying away from the
Ambiguity of the present
Living in a handsome yesterday
For a beautiful tomorrow

But when we’re left together
And there’s just you and I
I come out of my independent sea
I extend my hand
Hungry for the warmth of yours
Craving for the soft caress
Of your eyes and smiles
And along sandy beaches
We leisurely walk side by side
The comfort of your closeness
Has no need for words
Till once again you must depart
The sun falls
The waves clash madly against
The solid wall of rock below us
You look behind
I’m gone
The outline of the cliff is bare
All to be seen a silhouette
Diving into a roaring sea


AP: 3rd place 2020

Submitted to contest EARLY DECEMBER STANDARD sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - December 1, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 4/15/2018 11:32:00 AM
wow, a very impressive one going down your poems on that second page, Line. Brian never allows poems more than 20 or 24 lines. I think if it had been shorter, it could have been a winner. It is with me. I need to get hubbie off to work now. And do "my time" in church library at 12. HOping to have a bit of time before then to finish best poems on this page two!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2018 11:43:00 AM
Thank you for your visit, Andrea. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/4/2017 9:35:00 PM
wow, the turbulence inside the teens mind, such a good way of describing this. a fav
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/5/2017 2:03:00 PM
Thank you, Lewis. So glad it resonates with you. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/2/2017 5:48:00 AM
Such a dramatic ending to this tragic love poem, Line. Very convincing in it's full scope of understanding the underlying current of emotions can led to the sad farewell ending. You pen is a most capable translator of human frailty. Excellent poetry. Love and peace always.
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Date: 12/1/2017 10:53:00 PM
Wow! A frightening ending. Nicely done!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/1/2017 11:24:00 PM
Just teenage drama, Kim.
Date: 12/1/2017 10:00:00 AM
Lovely ... The ending is fascinating ...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/1/2017 6:17:00 PM
Thank you, Probir. It's all about the drama.
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