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Teen Scene

teenage bombshell

the future in your eyes
caught at crossroads

decisions
on a whimsy

your life
in the balance

winding paths
of outcomes

the price
eternity



AP: 3rd place 2021

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2020

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Christuraj Alex

March 11, 2022 at 9:31 PM

Feelings, tenderness, dreams and obligations of youth is illustrated in very short words and verses. Very beautifully written. Congratulations!

March 12, 2022 at 4:06 PM

Thank you, Christuraj ~ much appreciated.

March 11, 2022 at 10:18 AM

Hope becomes them both, as if they were blind, with the belief they will see again. congratulations to Line, from Meru.

March 11, 2022 at 2:38 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Meru ~

Timothy Mcguire

February 24, 2020 at 7:30 PM

Deep and I like it!

February 24, 2020 at 8:24 PM

Thanks, Timothy.

February 24, 2020 at 4:18 PM

You are so right, Line, especially with girls. Landmines lurk everywhere. We maneuver delicately --- and pray for the best. Nicely penned! :) Gershon

February 24, 2020 at 5:59 PM

Sometimes the price for mistakes is brutal.

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