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Teen Mother

Girl
Young, pregnant
Crying, hiding, contemplating
Student, daughter, girlfriend, woman
Worrying, praying, dreaming
Painful, joyful
Mother

~Christopher Thor Britt

Copyright © Christopher Thor Britt | Year Posted 2013

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/20/2013 7:45:00 PM Congrat... Awesome win...PD Login to Reply

Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 11/16/2013 2:28:00 PM Wonderful, Christopher, you capture the transition from girl to mother well. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/16/2013 2:22:00 PM Ahh!! Very descriptive of the girl becoming an adult but within is still the girl..Congrats.Sara Login to Reply

Juliet Ligon Date: 11/15/2013 2:17:00 PM So much emotion and perspective captured in so few words. Congrats, Christopher! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/15/2013 3:05:00 AM great life stages of a girl- woman.. sweet cheers to you, cnristopher!..:) huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/14/2013 11:28:00 PM this is great how you transitioned her into motherhood, adulthood. Congrats. Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 11/14/2013 7:31:00 PM such a true scenario in today's world....congrats on your win :) great write! Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 11/14/2013 2:26:00 PM An original topic, and done to perfection. Well done, Christopher.......congrats on a winning poem! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 11/14/2013 11:23:00 AM congrats on a great win Chris Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/14/2013 4:54:00 AM congrats on your win Chris xx Login to Reply

Roger Horsch Date: 11/13/2013 10:10:00 PM Congrats Moo. Good job Roger Login to Reply Christopher Thor Britt Date: 11/13/2013 10:27:00 PM Thanks, Ger.

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 11/13/2013 9:57:00 PM Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, christopher Login to Reply Christopher Thor Britt Date: 11/13/2013 10:04:00 PM Thank you Dr. Mehta. Your contest was a fun opportunity for me to try out a new style of poetry. My brother, Roger Horsch, had challenged me to give it a try. CTB

Gerald Kithinji Date: 11/6/2013 4:18:00 PM Diamonds are forever- especially poetic ones! Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 11/2/2013 11:44:00 PM This is an excellent diamante poem my dear friend Christopher! I love it and so enjoyed. Good luck in the contest! Thanks a lot for sharing and your lovely congratulatory comments on my poem! love and big hugs, Leonora Login to Reply Christopher Thor Britt Date: 11/13/2013 10:04:00 PM Thank you Leonora.

Mark Peterson Date: 11/2/2013 7:28:00 PM I was unfamiliar with this form but like it very much as you have penned it. More could not be said with fewer words. Mark Login to Reply

Lisa Mccall Date: 11/1/2013 6:16:00 PM So much truth and deep. Very well penned. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/31/2013 1:43:00 PM amazing life stages well expressed in diamante form... creative, chris!..:) Login to Reply

Kechi Odibi Date: 10/31/2013 3:31:00 AM Well written...dilenma of a growing girl, Kechi Login to Reply

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu Date: 10/31/2013 3:25:00 AM Wow! A deep poem that has the real meaning hidden....nicely penned! Kudos! Bob- Based On Belief. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/31/2013 1:43:00 AM wow, that's an outstanding one! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/30/2013 9:45:00 PM Thanks for the entry, Christopher Login to Reply