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Teen Mother

Girl
Young, pregnant
Crying, hiding, contemplating
Student, daughter, girlfriend, woman
Worrying, praying, dreaming
Painful, joyful
Mother

~Christopher Thor Britt

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Poet Destroyer A

November 20, 2013 at 7:45 PM

Congrat... Awesome win...PD

Sheri Fresonke Harper

November 16, 2013 at 2:28 PM

Wonderful, Christopher, you capture the transition from girl to mother well. Congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick

November 16, 2013 at 2:22 PM

Ahh!! Very descriptive of the girl becoming an adult but within is still the girl..Congrats.Sara

Juliet Ligon

November 15, 2013 at 2:17 PM

So much emotion and perspective captured in so few words. Congrats, Christopher!

Nette Onclaud

November 15, 2013 at 3:05 AM

great life stages of a girl- woman.. sweet cheers to you, cnristopher!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

November 14, 2013 at 11:28 PM

this is great how you transitioned her into motherhood, adulthood. Congrats.

Sandra Adams

November 14, 2013 at 7:31 PM

such a true scenario in today's world....congrats on your win :) great write!

Carrie Richards

November 14, 2013 at 2:26 PM

An original topic, and done to perfection. Well done, Christopher.......congrats on a winning poem!

Joseph May

November 14, 2013 at 11:23 AM

congrats on a great win Chris

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 14, 2013 at 4:54 AM

congrats on your win Chris xx

Roger Horsch

November 13, 2013 at 10:10 PM

Congrats Moo. Good job Roger

Christopher Thor Britt

November 13, 2013 at 10:27 PM

Thanks, Ger.

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 13, 2013 at 9:57 PM

Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, christopher

Christopher Thor Britt

November 13, 2013 at 10:04 PM

Thank you Dr. Mehta. Your contest was a fun opportunity for me to try out a new style of poetry. My brother, Roger Horsch, had challenged me to give it a try. CTB

Gerald Kithinji

November 6, 2013 at 4:18 PM

Diamonds are forever- especially poetic ones!

Len Gasun

November 2, 2013 at 11:44 PM

This is an excellent diamante poem my dear friend Christopher! I love it and so enjoyed. Good luck in the contest! Thanks a lot for sharing and your lovely congratulatory comments on my poem! love and big hugs, Leonora

Christopher Thor Britt

November 13, 2013 at 10:04 PM

Thank you Leonora.