Tedious Flames

I used to be a zippo 
with a wondrous flame, 
mesmerizing many men 
mending my path to fame. 
  
But with every flip and every trick 
my liquid flame trickled slowly away. 
Hinges would break with every shake, 
day and day after day. 
  
Now my own precious fluid  
is nearly depleted. 
Feeling less and less lucid, 
more and more often I'm seated. 
My hinges have broken, 
leaving so many words unspoken, 
for the will to speak them is gone. 
  
Now I remember 
that upon my birth 
was given to me, 
a lifetime warranty. 
I can replace 
my current disgrace 
with elegant grace, 
but that would not be me. 
  
I gaze at the stars 
into the dead trenches of mars, 
where life used to be. 
And I see 
the beauty 
in death. 
I look at my scars 
and relive their stories. 
I laugh at my reactions to the pain  
I thought was so intense, 
until I felt the next, 
laughing that I was far from slain. 
For even though I'm broken
and my fluid is gone, 
the memory of my flame 
shall burn on and on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/29/2012 9:22:00 AM
Bravo, Congrats on having your great poem being featured on the PoetrySoup Homepage this week, keep tapping from the incredible ink flowing from your honoured heart. Wishing you many more features in the future. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 8/26/2012 8:48:00 PM
RAFEAL, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. :-) Always~PD
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Date: 7/25/2012 7:08:00 AM
This write has some promise! On this site you never enter a contest with the form labeled 'I don't know' the judges will not even read the write most times if 'I don't know' is up there as a form. To have the write be seriously read please.........simply put down your form as VERSE. [Though this verse has too much rhyme in it to be called Free Verse] It is a good write and thank you for letting me see it. Light & Love
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Date: 7/25/2012 7:10:00 AM
the Biggest category is VERSE under Verse comes RHYME [many many types of form rhyme] the type of Verse your write is specifically is PERSONIFICATION since you are giving human qualities to a lighter which is VERY clever!
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