Technicolor Daydream

Bottles bobbing in melting ice
Little lights littering the house
Clicking chatters of party guests gushing 
Colors creating cosmic creations of fantasy as
My mind drifts into a delightfully dreamy bliss

This is my first attempt at an alliteration. I may have done it completely wrong. Sorry it is so short as well.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 12:09 PM
Excellent write - I love it and the imagery is impressive! Bravo!
Gibson Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 12:01 PM
I think you did it very well. You have a lovely creative gift, Brittany.
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