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My dram ram has spent it's last byte MS word won't type another poetic wishful might India calling techie says charge $$ that visa and PC will be good for a few years Over the phone line and through the Dell to better 'puting we go The geek knows the way to carry away my short and dwindling dough! Over the phone line and through the Dell Charge what?? this is starting to smell!! The geek knows he may talk away my sanity Hey!! This PC still don't 'poot!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/3/2011 1:34:00 PM
True to the bone. Good work. Jim
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Date: 8/3/2011 12:03:00 PM
You'll probably save yourself mucho dinero by just buying another one. After trying to have the old one fixed and finding it still didn't work right we learned. We went to WallMart and bought a Acer. It works a lot better. Nice job my friend. Good luck. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/2/2011 7:08:00 PM
Ha Ha, good one Doris...
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:09:00 PM
Be like red green and duct tape will fix everything. ha aha ha. My back and knees are still killing me softly so I know what we are going thru. I guess we need humor or the pain can get us down. Have a great day. love phyl
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:25:00 AM
Doris, I like your humor here. We have all been taken in this game. Thanks for your comments awhile back on my poems. I was an editor for a time.
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Date: 7/31/2011 11:25:00 PM
Best way to fix it is with a hammer and glue. Cool poem D. Love and hugs and Kisses
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Date: 7/28/2011 9:55:00 PM
I have a Dell too but paid for the software contract and it was well worth it when mine crashed. Talk about trauma! I appreciated this one.
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Date: 7/28/2011 11:09:00 AM
All in a days bursts dear poet ! *smiles* Awesome write Doris ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james
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Date: 7/28/2011 11:00:00 AM
Down with the dastardly geeks! Down with the computer companies for not including instructions with their instruments. I believe the geeks pay them off. Good write. Love, daver
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Date: 7/28/2011 12:50:00 AM
I agree my friend. Satan invented computers to get at me personally. I get so mad I just about lose all my religion right in front of God and everybody. However if he makes special efforts to get at me I must be doing something right so that's a good thing. Right? God Bless, JB :)
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Date: 7/27/2011 8:42:00 PM
yes funny. but it was worth the art. you aroused thoughts i don't want to think about now. computer problems.
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Date: 7/27/2011 6:01:00 PM
this is a funny poem even though I feel your pain, Doris. We've had a couple of those sessions spending hours on the phone trying to get something done with even warranties. I enjoyed your poem. If it's for a contest it should do well.
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Date: 7/27/2011 2:28:00 PM
Sounds like my old computer! A fun write. Love, Robert.
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Date: 7/27/2011 2:20:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in something...I will have to see if I can find out what...Mom
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Date: 7/27/2011 1:10:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Doris. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again soon to read more. Love, Carol
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