Tech: a Unsubscribed Love

(Smoking is Injurious to health. And it is hard to explain to people who haven’t experienced it. But why I smoke?)

No mean, what I am doing
Smoking, drinking or leave eating 
Now I am in the world of smoking and drinking.

I think you may know that
After our breakup
I am not lonely 
My god “shiva” is my friend
Who always with me 
After our breakup.

But you know, before our breakup
I don’t know, who is he
But now I am able to know that 
He is a partner of my loneliness.  

Now, I am look like an old man
Who noise about a God
To make my life free.

But no one hears my voice
And again I am lonely 
Now I am waiting for someone
Who able to show me the path of death 
With a great dead breath.
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August 5, 2024 at 8:02 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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September 11, 2017 at 5:56 AM
Well written..
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