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Tech: a Unsubscribed Love

(Smoking is Injurious to health. And it is hard to explain to people who haven’t experienced it. But why I smoke?) No mean, what I am doing Smoking, drinking or leave eating Now I am in the world of smoking and drinking. I think you may know that After our breakup I am not lonely My god “shiva” is my friend Who always with me After our breakup. But you know, before our breakup I don’t know, who is he But now I am able to know that He is a partner of my loneliness. Now, I am look like an old man Who noise about a God To make my life free. But no one hears my voice And again I am lonely Now I am waiting for someone Who able to show me the path of death With a great dead breath.

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Date: 8/5/2024 8:02:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/11/2017 5:56:00 AM
Well written..
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