Tears Pleiades

Tears come when our torn heart
tells through watery eyes
tales of heartache brought by
talks of others or thoughts
that are negative and
tend to end when we stop
them with positive thoughts.

26.94.2021
Contest Name - Pleiades T
Sponsor	- Kim Merryman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:44 PM
Rama, I really like your explanation of what causes tears and what stops them! Nice flow to your words! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
Goldsmith Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Balasubramanian Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 6:38 PM
Thanks. Take care, God bless! Rama
Roper Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 7:57 PM
Great Pleiades, Rama , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Balasubramanian Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 9:06 AM
Thanks Eve. Looking forward to your new nursery rhymes contest. Take care, God bless! Rama
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