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Tears Pleiades

Tears come when our torn heart tells through watery eyes tales of heartache brought by talks of others or thoughts that are negative and tend to end when we stop them with positive thoughts. 26.94.2021 Contest Name - Pleiades T Sponsor - Kim Merryman

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/29/2021 7:44:00 PM

Rama, I really like your explanation of what causes tears and what stops them! Nice flow to your words! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/28/2021 11:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 4/28/2021 6:38:00 PM

Thanks. Take care, God bless! Rama

Eve Roper

Date: 4/27/2021 7:57:00 PM

Great Pleiades, Rama , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 4/28/2021 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Eve. Looking forward to your new nursery rhymes contest. Take care, God bless! Rama