Tears On Broken Wings

She is singing a painful song that morn,
Birds are chirping from the oak tree.
Sitting alone beneath the shed of a leaves.
The shadow of past haunting her silence.

A decade of love and breathless heart,
The scar of memories were painted like an art.
A treasure that no one would like to keep.
That painful battered moment was left.

All that she dreams is a happy life.
A pleasure time with the arms of her man.
A solemn days with her beloved children.
Dreams now have flown in the wind.

She used to be strong for an everyday battle.
With the thunder and storm that strikes her.
A young and weak trunk that can easily break.
Cut and wounded by his double-edged blade.

She had once dream to fly in a far away land.
Where no pain can haunt her, 
Where wind blows and spread her wings.
A place where comfort and love lives in.

Suddenly the heaven open its door.
The angels start to cry and share with her mourn.
She stood up and dance her soul in the rain.
Tears keep on  fallin' on her broken wings.



** 7th Place Winner in Nathan D.'s Contest: Any poem #5 **
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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 6:14 AM
nice.. sad but utterly compelling.. :) congratulations.. :)
Liwayway Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 11:21 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Aiyah. This is indeed a very creative piece though it's sad. thanks for passing by on my poem Have a nice day always. hugs ;)
Torres Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Hi Paz, Thank you for dropping by.. and for this wonderful congratulations!! .. I appreciate your kindness so much... :'))
A  Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 1:39 AM
Aiyah, Congrats! Enjoyed your winning poem. Love ~SKAT~
Torres Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 10:49 AM
EiyaH SkaT!! ..Thank you for this warm congratulations!!! ;'0)
A   Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 11:40 PM
:) Aiyah:).... Congratulations, in Nathan's contest... xox~ LINDA
Torres Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 10:50 AM
ThaNk you PD dear!!! ... your comment lifted me so high!! ^__^
Parker Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:49 PM
congrats on your win..a sad poem
Torres Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 10:51 AM
Ei, FreD.. :o(0) ..ThaNk you for the visit and comment!!^__^
May Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:00 PM
Congrats on your win Aiyah
Torres Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 10:43 AM
Thanks to you, Joseph!!! ..my deep appreciation.. ^__^
Mehta Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 7:23 AM
Wonderful poetry and congrats on the fine win, aiyah
Torres Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Dr. Ram.. Thank you so much for this comment.. ;')) i'm honoured to have congratulated by the most talented and respected poet here @ PS..^_^ oxox
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