Tears of Unhappiness

Falling as heavy raindrops
Tears of unhappiness fell
In the reddish face
Wiped away with caring tenderness 
By an affectionate hand













July 31, 2017
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Roper Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 8:51 PM
I can see this as one of my boys growing up wiping their tears away trying to comfort the pain away ~* Enter my contest, I can see this as a bigger write. Hugs
Negron Flores Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 9:56 PM
Thank you Eve.
Raynes Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 10:22 PM
Deep tears... this is a good poem Nayda, thanks.
Negron Flores Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 9:56 PM
Thank you Lewis.
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