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Tears of the Unborn Child

Incoming to live I died unborn, and I don't know if I did Something wrong. Don't play on being bemused Mom, As I'm gone Now. Why the killing of the unknown me I also did not know you Nor the world's beauty, You know I'm true. I was assured to life by two Participants, you and dad I took all the believe I had, For you mom are to give birth. I thought I was under warthog Shadow, therefore not vulnerable, Not knowing you wanted me gone, Now I'm not available, Honestly you're not responsible. You terminated my life, Did abortion, And I'm now abortive, Failed to cruise to living. I died unborn.

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/6/2016 4:54:00 PM

A deep and emotional piece....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/5/2016 9:28:00 PM

Sello,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sello Modiba
Date: 3/6/2016 4:08:00 AM

Hi Linda. Great thanks for warm welcome, it means a lot for me. I did joint the group to share what I have and what I can have... Knowledge and experience. My poems are written to heal, motivate, encourage and uplift people's lives. I am so lucky to have you too

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/5/2016 9:40:00 AM

A soul touching write on abortion. I loved the first person usage:}

Sello Modiba
Date: 3/6/2016 4:03:00 AM

Thanks